We appreciate the /Thank you very much for the excellent/ encouraging/ kind/ positive/constructive comments/ suggestions/ recommendation/ remarks.
We sincerely thank the reviewer for thoroughly examining our manuscript and providing very helpful comments to guide our revision.
Sincere thanks should be given to the reviewer for the constructive comments and suggestions. The responses to the comments are given below.
感谢建议…, which have helped improve our manuscript. To address your and the reviewers’ concerns, we have provided more information on… and improved the interpretation of the data. We also asked a native English speaker to edit the use of English grammar.
We have tried our best to revise the manuscript according to your kind and construction comments and suggestions.
Please find the following detailed responses to your comments and suggestions.
We sincerely hope that this revised manuscript has addressed all your comments and suggestions.
We have provided a point-by-point response to the reviewers' comments below in blue color.
Our response to the questions are shown below. / We have addressed each point below. （我们对这些问题的答复如下。/ 我们在下文中对每一点进行了阐述。）
We have collected more data and included detailed discussions to address the reviewer’s main concerns.
We sincerely hope that this revised manuscript has addressed all your comments and suggestions. We appreciated for reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval. Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.
We would like to thank the referee again for taking the time to review our manuscript.
Yes, we agree…/ We fully agree with the reviewer that
To address the reviewer’s concern, …
Thanks a lot for the reviewer’s comments. …
Thank the reviewer for the constructive comments and suggestions. Yes…
To verify the effect of XXX modification on the structure of XXX, we supplemented the
Thanks for your kind suggestions, which is valuable for improving the accuracy of the manuscript.
More discussions/data/details/descriptions/information/ have been included in the revised manuscript (Line 100-101)
We have changed [original text] to [edited text] (page 5, line 24)
We have revised the text to address your concerns and hope that it is now clearer. Please see page 5 of the revised manuscript, lines 9–20, and page 6, lines 1–20.
To address the reviewer’s concern, we have rewritten this sentence as follows:
We have fixed the error/ removed…
We agree and have updated.
This observation is correct. We have changed.
We have made the change. The new sentence reads as follows.
Corrected, as suggested. / Rephrased, as suggested.
Thanks for your constructive suggestion, which is highly appreciated. We have carefully scrutinized the manuscript, and made corresponding revisions including some typos, grammatical errors and long sentences, etc.
This manuscript has been revised extensively according to the reviewers' constructive suggestions. In addition, the expression of the manuscript has been improved with the help of a native English speaker.
Thanks for the references, which are now included in the revised manuscript. Specific references are listed as follows: XXX
Thanks for your comments, which is highly appreciated. As for the novelty, it is well-known that XXX. However, XXX. Although there are some reports focusing on XXX, the focus on XXX has been rarely explored. Especially for XXX that features some unparalleled merits like XXX, only several reports underlined XXX. More unfortunately, little attention was paid to XXX. In this report, 重申创新.Thanks again to the reviewer on suggesting to further improve this manuscript, we have studied comments carefully and have made corresponding corrections which we hope meet with approval.
We agree with the reviewer that further elaborating on this point using new data would be helpful. However, we believe that expanding our dataset is neither feasible, given the costs involved, nor would significantly support our argument. For this reason, we chose not to make this change, but we added the following sentence to paragraph 3 in the discussion: “Though having a larger dataset would offer further insight…”.
We apologize if our original Figure 2 did not show…. We did not intend to…. We have modified the figure and hope that it is now clear that…. We believe that adding a new figure, as the reviewer suggested, would be unnecessary given that our new Figure 2 shows….
We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful suggestion and agree that it would be useful to demonstrate that…; however, such an analysis is beyond the scope of our paper, which aims only to show that…. Nevertheless, we recognize this limitation should be mentioned in the paper, so we added the following sentence…
…was not the scope of this study. Keeping the reviewer’s comment in mind, we prefer to quantify this effect using the model system in our following works.
As we received conflicting advice from another reviewer, we decided to make the change they suggested, because…. We hope this was the right decision.
Revision letter 的模板
(A) Thank you very much for your e-mail dated 16 June, 2017 regarding the review results of our manuscript (es-2017-). I am pleased to submit the revised manuscript to... Enclosed please find the revised paper and the point-by-point list of our response to reviewers’ comments.
This manuscript has been revised very carefully according to the constructive comments from the three reviewers. Their main concerns have been well addressed. The following is the highlighted revisions that we have made:
(B) Please find our revised manuscript entitled “…(ac-2019-)” for publication in...
We are glad that the reviewers find the work important, and very much appreciate their specific comments, which have helped improve our manuscript. We have provided additional data and revised the manuscript carefully. We believe that this work is now suitable for publication in...
(C) Please find our revised manuscript entitled “… (2020-)” for publication...
We are glad that the editor and the reviewers find the work important, and very much appreciate the comments, which have helped improve our manuscript. We have conducted additional experiments and revised the manuscript carefully. We believe that this work is now suitable for publication in...
We describe a point-by-point response to the comments from the editor and the reviewers below, and also highlight the revisions in blue in the manuscript.